I felt like this was majorly a clinical version of patios for international audiences and that is fine but the way it is implemented is very clunky which is strange. I want to be clear, you can't sprinkle the word "mon" into sentences like parsley, and call it patois. The language of this book bothers me, the phrases used, the way patois is integrated is strange. I can't tell what this book is trying to be, it feels like a punishment, the worlding building is a slugfest, the characters thus far uninspiring and uninteresting. I didn't finish the book, I am going to try to but I find this book so offensive as a Jamaican, born and raised in Jamaica that it's hard to read. I desperately wanted to like this book, and yet, I don't. witches fighting together against a common foe. The premise sounds amazing, right? Jamaican.
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